Short and full of emotion, this free short story had me interested from the first page. Vic, who tells the story, is so full of righteous rage at his older lover's betrayal, that he doesn't think straight. The anger almost drips of the pages as he rants and raves about the injustice of it all, the sheer betrayal of Marc taking a lover much younger than Vic while Vic was away on business. I got so pulled into this, ready to yell at Marc right alongside with Vic, that the twist took me completely by surprise. Very well done!

If you like stories with lots of emotion, if you enjoy a twist that will make you sit up and go "Huh? How did that happen?", and if you want some very hot and loving action between the sheets on top of it all, then you will probably enjoy this short story as much as I did.
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2.5 stars. A bit unfinished. ( )

2.5 stars. A bit unfinished. ( )