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Charles L Fields

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Tainted Dish (2012) 2 eksemplarer
Broken Spirit (2011) 2 eksemplarer
The Molina Curse (2013) 1 eksemplar
Canyons of the Soul (2011) 1 eksemplar
Dark as Dickens (2021) 1 eksemplar

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Well, this is a new one for me. I've been writing reviews here for what, two years? Thereabouts, anyway. And in all that time I haven’t read a book I couldn’t finish. Until now.

The offender is a book called Tainted Dish. It’s the third in the Charles Stone series of travel mysteries by Charles L. Fields, and I got to tell you—I don’t want to rip it to shreds. I really don’t. The author is a gentlemen if there ever was one. When I told him I didn’t like the book, he asked me for a more detailed critique and then thanked me for my input. He was humble and courteous and everything that an author should be. A joy to talk to, really. Some of those folks on Poketfulofbooks’ Authors Behaving Badly series could learn a thing or two from him. But like it says on the review policy, if I read it, that means I got to review it. And rules is rules, right?

Right. So let’s get to it.

Charles Stone is in his fifties, a widower, and part owner of the Boston security firm McGraw Stone and Tucker. His previous adventures have taken him around the globe, investigating, swashbuckling, and generally solving peoples’ problems where they intersect with international politics and intrigue. His third adventure, however, has him sticking closer to home. A friend of the family (also recently windowed, as it so happens) named Janice Johnson has inherited her late husband’s half of a very successful satellite dish development and manufacturing company. The other half of the company is owned by Sam Torkilson, and he’s pissed at having to share it. To make matters worse, the plant manager has been found impaled and gruesomely murdered on one of their prototype satellite dishes, so Janice calls in Chuck and company to sort things out.

Sounds like the kind of thing that would be right up my alley, doesn’t it? Sure, that’s why I requested a review copy in the first place. But there were problems with it I just couldn’t overlook. The dialogue felt stilted and unrealistic in parts, and did nothing to lend any depth to the characters. The villain seemed like a caricature with dialogue and reactions that felt grossly exaggerated—and don’t get me started on the plot holes. In addition, every other page it seemed like the author was going on about another Boston landmark, which is interesting and all (and maybe why the book was called a “travel mystery”), but all it did was slow down the narrative with tangential information and turned it into more of a travel guide more than a mystery. The book was rife with grammatical and typographical errors, too. But what really got my goat, the thing that made put down the book and say, “I just can’t do this anymore,” was the POV.

Point of view. Yeah, that old ditty. I’ve railed against POV here multiple times in the past, but I’ve never seen anything quite like this. At around page fifty, there’s a scene with the evil villain, told from third person limited from the evil villain’s point of view. He get’s a call from our hero (Charles), who tells him off about some of the nasty things he’s been doing. And then the POV abruptly switches—no scene break, mind you—to the hero’s first person narrative as the villain hangs up on him. Number one, I don’t like books that use both first person and third person in alternating scenes. If your main character’s first person narrative can’t carry the story by itself, it shouldn’t be in first person. Part of the reason they invented the third person narrative in the first place (they being… I don’t know, the Sumerians or some other old as shit civilization) was so they could tell the story of multiple people in the same narrative. It has worked perfectly fine for thousands of years. Don’t mess with it.

Of course there are exceptions. Epistolary novels? Sure. Round-robin story telling stuff like The Canterbury Tales? Awesome. But a contemporary mystery/thriller with no narrative gimmick that just mashes up 1st person and 3rd person POVs for no good reason? That I can’t abide by. That’s just my opinion, of course. Plenty of authors have defied Wilhoit’s Rules of Narrative Structure (I’m trademarking that when I nail down some other tenets, by the way) and met with plenty of success and literary acclaim. But screw ‘em, I don’t care. Alternating first and third person just shouldn’t be done. And when it happens in the middle of a chapter sans-scene break, I’m out. Cash in my chips, thank you very much for letting me play, but I must be on my way.

I’ve reviewed some real stinkers on here before, but none that I simply couldn’t finish. Maybe the difference between this one and the rest comes down to my own prejudices about POV and narrative structure. Maybe, but I’m not so sure. So take what I said with a grain of salt. Hell, read it yourself and formulate your own opinion. If someone wants the book, I’ll even mail it to them free of charge (U.S. only, though). You just say the word. It’ll be one less book for me to keep track of, and maybe someone else will get some enjoyment out of it.

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WillyMammoth | May 23, 2012 |
SENTIMENTAL ME by Charles L. Fields is an action, adventure, travel,mystery suspense set in modern day America,and Mexico. It is well written, fast paced with twists and turns. It has violence, murder, drugs, arms smuggling, powerful people, drug cartels, fraud, and a wild ride of action and adventure. The characters are real life. The plot interesting and fast paced. It will take you to hell and back with the characters. This book was received for the purpose of review from Bostick Communications and the author and details can be found at Outskirtspress,Inc. and My Book Addiction and More.… (mere)
 
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tarenn | 1 anden anmeldelse | Dec 30, 2010 |
Boston attorney Charles Stone handles special assignments for Franklin Life.

A $500,000 life insurance policy was issued on the life of U.S. Border Patrol Agent Jack Spears. The beneficiary is Senorita Consuelo de V.

Spears is found murdered and Stone is asked to find out more about this Mexican woman.

The novel is advertised as a travel mystery so as Stone drives from Boston to Mexico, he makes many stops and describes them to the reader. There is some unnecessary descriptions in this and it takes away from the story, i.e. the reader didn't need to know what Stone had for dinner the first night or, that the restaurant had a salad bar.

Concidences abound. Stone crosses the Mexican border and goes into a bar. That's the very bar that Consuela, "Connie" is sitting. She immediately knows who Stone is and sets up a meeting with Stone and her boss, Eduardo Silva. At the meeting, Silva tells Stone that he attended the U. Nevada school of mines. It just so happens that Stone knows the person who runs the mining school and Silva tells him that the man was a major influence on his life.

The dialogue is stilted. Each time there is a description of how Spears died, it's always the "brutal" murder. Having the same word repeated each time eventually seemed too repititious.

I enjoyed the story but fgelt that it wasn't realistic in that an insurance company would check out the beneficiary before a policy is issued. Once issued, most insurance companies stand by the insurance and pay out claimes in a speedy manner.

The author can tell a story and the plot is compelling enough to keep the reader interested. I think that with some professional editing and more realistic dialogue, the next novel by this author will be an improvement.
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mikedraper | 1 anden anmeldelse | Dec 27, 2010 |
We often encounter people that have fascinating lives and Charles L. Fields is one of them. In the preface of his book, Charles says "This book is more than a memoir. It is also a collage of travel journals, reflections and observations."

I smiled when I reflected on my own experiences of my first car and it certainly wasn't near as exciting as the one Charles purchased. For twenty-five dollars be bought a "1938 baby blue converted funeral car with pull-down velvet shades and other bizarre accoutrements. " I also enjoyed the short travel log of his trip to Hawaii because it reminded me of going to the same places there many years ago.

This is an enjoyable book to read; nothing exciting or outstanding but it's not meant to be. This is one ordinary man telling others the stories of his life, stories that reflect a journey that many will find reflective.
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iwatson | Nov 20, 2010 |

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