Chris Bellows

The story started good. But the infusion of backstory flashbacks kind of messed up the main storyline. And it seemed that Mr. Bellows was so much focused on the writing the backstory that he could not realize that there is not much happening in the main story. If he would have stuck to the main story's characters, the story could have been as good as many of his other masterpieces. Or he could have written a longer story for proper flow of the main story.

Only thing good about this book is its cover. Within few pages the story gets extremely boring. It's way too slow paced. Also note that the story has underage material. Must be avoided by all the fans of Chris Bellows. It's probably his worst work.

Although I like the stories of Chris Bellows, as he writes extreme femdom stories, this book is extremely boring actually. Maybe characters are not build properly, or the scenes are not described properly. Whatever, I felt lost after reading one third of the book and couldn't continue anymore.

It's a good story overall. Same as 'Becoming Miss Ashley's Pet, A D/s Divorce', & 'The Gimp' this one is also extreme, and takes the reader to a heavy ride into Femdom Fantasy. But by the end you feel that there is something missing. Like, there should have been some more to the story line. The ending could also have been improved. But overall, it was fun to read.