Completely incoherent: made it up to page 50 (my this is where you can quit if you really can't stand it point) and abandoned ship. Very sad comedown from "Murder at the Museum of Man". ( )

My first impression of this book was that the language was, for lack of a better word, annoying. The author seemed to fall into the trap of using big words just because he knew them, which simply made the prose sound dated and stuffy. My sense of annoyance eased a little bit, however, once I became better acquainted with the protagonist and first-person narrator, Norman de Ratour. He is the essence of old-fashioned trying to stay contemporary. Although his language was bothersome at first, he quickly becomes more endearing than annoying, more like a grandfather figure than one of those long-winded old men who love nothing more than to hear themselves speak. However, aside from that, I didn't find this book very original. Not generally a fan of mysteries anyway, I found very little to truly enjoy. Most of the characters are unconvincing in their performances and agendas, and the relationships are overly fluid and very superficial. The story as a whole was simply not believable, and suspension of disbelief didn't kick in at all. It's presented as something that could happen in our world, and yet somehow it just doesn't fit. ( )

To be honest, I had high hopes and expectations when I began reading “The Love Potion Murders in the Museum of Man”. Sadly, these hopes were not fulfilled. I got through the first 100 pages, which is the amount I usually read when I can see the book sucks but I want to give it a chance. That being said, the book plods along. There are a lot of characters with really strange names. I felt at times that I should be making a list to keep track of them. The main character, Norman de Ratour, is supposed to be the director of the Museum of Man and a part-time detective (?). I wasn't really sure why he considered himself a detective. The reader must have had to have read the first book in the series to get that. None of the seemingly hundred characters that I came across were in the least bit likable, even Norman. His main goal in life, beside solving crime, was to keep his museum out of the hands of the University with which it was loosely affiliated. Why? Who knows, probably ego. He seemed to think that he was the only thing standing in the way of a terrible catastrophe. I came away really not caring if the University took over the Museum.

Also, there was a bit of 'ick' factor in here. Norman's wife is dying of cancer. His step-daughter flirts with him and he, I expect, will follow through on it. I wonder if he will wait until his wife is dead? I refuse to find out. Reading this book has been a thorough waste of time: hours I will never recover. (Yes, unbelievably it took me hours to get through 100 pages.) Reading a mystery/detective novel should not be this much work.

PS The author likes to use $20 words when an ordinary word would suffice. Showing off, I think. You might want to have a dictionary at your side if you don't know what amanuensis means. You'll encounter it on the first page. Also, brush up on your French. He peppers French phrases all over the book. ( )

I only got a few chapters into this book because it was so strangely written. The author went on strangle little tangents and wrote the whole thing in a very clipped, stilted manner. Generally just not engaging. ( )

I am finding it *very* difficult to get into this book. I've tried several times and barely make it past the second chapter! There are too many characters with little description for me to hold on to, so I feel like I don't know any of them at all. I keep waiting for *something* to be different so I understand what is going on!

[Updated] After reading other reviews and finding out what is supposed to be happening in this book, I officially give up on it. I am NOT interested in reading about some skeezy guy who thinks too much of himself, and too little of other people. Obviously the writing is poor if so many of us can't get past the first few chapters. It makes me wonder if the prequel is this bad....but I don't think I want to find out, given this book's reputation. I'm down-grading to half a star for bigoted stereotypes alone. ( )