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Running: RUN

af Shaheer Henderson

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Issues just on the sample as I wouldn't pay $1 for a 6 page story especially with first page the cover image:

1) Massive run ons abound.
2) Fragments are masquerading as sentences.
3) Punctuation is not anywhere near accurate.
4) The samale is a single paragraph by the way the author wrote it. To be done correctly, it should have been several paragraphs.
5) To go with punctuation issues, words are in quotes for no reason at all. For example, the word running when the character is literally running.
6) Editing was missed completely for example, "...there's is...".
7) Capitalization is missed in various places.
8) When writing prose, I find most go with having a character knock on the door rather than end a sentence without said action, possibly because the house just came into sight, to then add "(knock Knock)" sans the quotes. Sadly, that capital K is in the book just like it is here.
9) Different dialogues by different characters are separated by a single comma with no capital letters in either dialog.

The last "2" sentences of the sample should be example enough for pretty much every point. I am only calling this 2 sentences as the dialog punctuation seems to be ignored due to all the commas connecting them.

"Please someone help please someone", a man rushes to the door, "oh my god what's wrong sir?" , "please they are after me!". The man looks over his shoulder and sees 40 torches and they are closing in fast.


There are so many errors in the short sample alone, you get several per penny for a 6 page book. I wouldn't accept this mess for free, let alone pay for it. ( )
  selbarton | Feb 24, 2017 |
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