The title made me laugh and I'll read this for that alone.

I think this story had a lot of potential--interesting concepts (like taking an incestous relationship public) and some hot themes (exhibitionism/voyeurism), but in the end it felt a little thin to me. The main characters, the obstacle they overcame, and even the world itself, felt like it was made out of paper. There was also a lack of attention to detail that I didn't like (Jason gets woken up by his older brother, everyone talks of a bit, they make breakfast, they talk for an hour, Jason spends an hour at the police station--and he still makes it to work on time). ( )