Still fresh writing but I hate to see the guys broken. ( )

OMG! 😮😮What the fuckity fuck is this series 😱🤯🤯



In this episode Matt and Dougie are in the care,torture of Nikolai.

Nikolai! Nikolai! this guy is worse than Madame, he uses mind games. He is manipulative and not the Laurent kind.. his methods are straight out of purgatory. He is sick, he is a psycho, and delusional.

Nikolai is trying to drive a wedge between the brothers.. and he is succeeding. To torture Matt he uses drugs and for Dougie, he uses rape 😡😡🤬🤬telling himself it is love making. Like i said the guy is cuckoo. I wanted to kill him but first torture him.



Atleast Matt is fighting but Dougie! damn! the guy is has somehow given up:

Just going to leave this here..

“I . . . I think I’m ready. I don’t know, I’ve never done this before. I don’t know. I’m sorry.
Please, I’m just tired of hurting.”
“Shhh. I know. I’ll never hurt you again if you don’t give me cause, Douglas. I want to love you,
remember?” Douglas nodded shakily, and Nikolai reached down, removing the boy’s hand from his
hole. Massaged his sides in slow, soothing circles. Thought of taking him like this, but no. It should
be face-to-face. He gave the boy’s ass a gentle swat to get him moving. “Roll onto your back. Now

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“You see?” he murmured, nipping kisses across the boy’s collarbone, into the hollow of his
shoulder. “No pain, correct? It feels good?”
“No, sir,” Douglas said, watery and weak. He sniffled, sniffled again. No doubt as

But Nikolai had taken that away. “No pain. It’s . . . I wouldn’t call it good, sir. It’s just . . . it’s full.” And then, once he’d realized the insult in his words, “Please don’t punish me, sir! I’m sorry. You told me not to lie.”
“Especially with a boy as beautiful as you, I like to watch. When I take you from behind I may record you, or put you in front of a mirror, or maybe have someone else fuck you so I can savor

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“Should I hurt you now, Douglas? Or will you grab hold of your pleasure?”
“Please don’t,”
“What did I tell you,” he growled, “about coming without permission?”
He thrust harder, faster, sped up his hand over Douglas’s deflating cock to match. The boy whimpered, then moaned, then shouted. Writhed beneath Nikolai, but he couldn’t escape. “Please,”he finally managed between desperate, panting breaths. “Please . . . s-stop, God, stop!”
“Be quiet, boy.This is why you ask permission. How dare you take your pleasure before your master’s? And then compound your offense by asking me to stop?”
“I’m sorry!” Douglas cried, hands pushing at Nikolai’s shoulders—no doubt subconsciously.
“I’m sorry! Please! Please stop please please please please . . .”
“Not until you’re hard again. Not until you come—or not—on my terms, with my permission.”
Douglas was full-on crying now, not merely tears but big sobs, ugly sniff..

Nikolai

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*Book source ~ NetGalley

This is the continuation of Dougie and Mat’s story of how they were kidnapped and sold into sexual slavery. They have begun their training with Nikolai who must mold them into the perfect submissives before they are sent off to their new Master.

It’s not the story, it’s definitely me. I’m just not interested in Dougie and Mat’s dilemma anymore. I don’t know if it’s all the psychological stuff, all the internal debate, Nikolai or it’s just not moving fast enough for me, but I’m done with this series. It’s still well-written with great characters, but apparently my tastes have changed. Don’t let my ennui put you off reading this series. ( )

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Per Riptide Publishing:
Reader discretion advised. This title contains the following sensitive themes: [non-consent]

Fair warning, this is NOT MM Romance. This is a psycho-sexual thriller which includes rape and torture. Please proceed with that knowledge in mind.

THE WRITING

So here's the thing. You're not only reading about the characters being controlled; YOU are being controlled. Many times throughout this series I've found myself thinking, "ah ha, I see what's going on here," only to find I was being played. Damn authors! Just know, if you're reading these books you're offering yourself up for manipulation. If you're willing, it's sublime.

THE CHARACTERS

Nikolai -

We'll practice everyday, Nicolai had said. To comfort him? Threaten?

Dougie -

"But...but he doesn't know what I've done here. Does he?" Such sweet insecurity.

Mat -

"Please," Mathias grunted out. "No more lessons today."

THE STORY

In this episode Dougie is his own worst enemy. Mat is just so fucked. And Nikolai is, ughhhhh, indescribable.

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This is a serial release:

First Season - Damnation
The Flesh Cartel #1: Capture
The Flesh Cartel #2: Auction

Second Season - Fragmentation
The Flesh Cartel #3: Choices
The Flesh Cartel #4: Consequences

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I want to thank Riptide Publishing for providing me with an advanced copy (eARC) of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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