So an Amish girl watches her brother (well not really her brother) in the barn and then she falls off a ladder. This story was well written but, entirely too short. i think with a little more it would have gotten at least 4 stars I just felt that it was over before it began and I do not think it was even the 23 pages that Amazon says it is. Good Writing. ( )

In The Barn is a delightfully naughty story whose innocence leads you for overlook the taboo pseudo-incestuous nature of the subject matter. It is the story of young step-siblings that are learning to shed their inhibitions and explore their sexuality in a sexually repressive Amish community. While the characters of Sarah and Eli are almost a bit too naive, it is none-the-less a nice, short story freebie that leaves you curious as to where these two might explore next if given a chance and could easily serve as the foundation to a much larger story! Yes, the story is short and not overly developed, as some have pointed out, but read the story for what it is and what it is intended to be, a simple, FREE introduction to the author's works! ( )