Dette emne er markeret som "i hvile"—det seneste indlæg er mere end 90 dage gammel. Du kan vække emnet til live ved at poste et indlæg.
If you want critical feedback, there are a number of online groups that will facilitate this. Most websites of this type are members-only, so that your story will not have been "published" to the general public, and you will be able to revise your story and perhaps get it published.
If you just want a few people to read and appreciate your story, you might get some satisfaction out of posting on a website like storiesville.