Ana Slash

Emily has fallen for her best friend's dad who also happens to be her dad's best friend. Jack has been lusting after Emily. Can they find a way for their love to work?

I liked the characters. The story has potential. This almost has a stream of consciousness feel to it. However, this book needs an editor and a proofreader. There are typos, extra words that make no sense where they are, no quotation marks where there needs to be, and a tightening up of the story. I hope the author will do that for her next story as well as this one. I would like to read it.… (mere)