John H Ames

I was looking forward to this after a few great reviews but I think we were reading different stories. This jock/nerd theme has been done so many times and done so much better than this. The writing was immature and the pacing of the story was ridiculous (the Nerd was 'in love' with the Jock after a day and a bit? FFS, I like an instalove as much as the next girl but there has to be valid chemistry to support it. There was none here.) and the characters stereotypical caricatures. I'm disappointed as I was expecting something fresh and got a poorly written story that offered nothing new.… (mere)

I was looking forward to this after a few great reviews but I think we were reading different stories. This jock/nerd theme has been done so many times and done so much better than this. The writing was immature and the pacing of the story was ridiculous (the Nerd was 'in love' with the Jock after a day and a bit? FFS, I like an instalove as much as the next girl but there has to be valid chemistry to support it. There was none here.) and the characters stereotypical caricatures. I'm disappointed as I was expecting something fresh and got a poorly written story that offered nothing new.… (mere)