Jack L. Knapp
Forfatter af Combat Wizard: A Paranormal-ESP Thriller
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Værker af Jack L. Knapp
Pirates (New Frontiers #6) 1 eksemplar
NEO: Near Earth Objects (New Frontiers #3) 1 eksemplar
BEMs: Bug Eyed Monsters (New Frontiers #4) 1 eksemplar
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Rough
Not a lot of emotion. Very matter of fact.
Some of the dialogue could get hard to follow as it might go for pages between names being used. Characters also tended to be a bit more pedantic than I feel is generally necessary.
The politics gets a bit overbearing at times. Stop beating the horse, already.
Not the worst thing I’ve read today, but not something I would generally recommend.
Not a lot of emotion. Very matter of fact.
Some of the dialogue could get hard to follow as it might go for pages between names being used. Characters also tended to be a bit more pedantic than I feel is generally necessary.
The politics gets a bit overbearing at times. Stop beating the horse, already.
Not the worst thing I’ve read today, but not something I would generally recommend.
It starts well
And then the wheels start to fall off.
The early chapters have a solid and authentic feel. The ‘magic’ system seems solid and the characters have depth. The nurse shows up and adds to the mix, then...wait, what?
Why did she leave? Why did he spills his guts about all of his powers to her seconds after meeting her? What happened to the Colonel?
There was ZERO motivation for her to leave. The interlude with the general was out of left field.
Insurmountable plot holes killed this for me. I quit just short of halfway through because the nurse shouldn’t have left. Absolutely no reason for her to abandon her post. In fact, leaving complicates their lives to no possible advantage. It was a pointless choice.
Clean grammar and spelling. A few acronyms that could’ve been explained better.
Massive plot hole.… (mere)
And then the wheels start to fall off.
The early chapters have a solid and authentic feel. The ‘magic’ system seems solid and the characters have depth. The nurse shows up and adds to the mix, then...wait, what?
Why did she leave? Why did he spills his guts about all of his powers to her seconds after meeting her? What happened to the Colonel?
There was ZERO motivation for her to leave. The interlude with the general was out of left field.
Insurmountable plot holes killed this for me. I quit just short of halfway through because the nurse shouldn’t have left. Absolutely no reason for her to abandon her post. In fact, leaving complicates their lives to no possible advantage. It was a pointless choice.
Clean grammar and spelling. A few acronyms that could’ve been explained better.
Massive plot hole.… (mere)
Rough
Not a lot of emotion. Very matter of fact.
Some of the dialogue could get hard to follow as it might go for pages between names being used. Characters also tended to be a bit more pedantic than I feel is generally necessary.
The politics gets a bit overbearing at times. Stop beating the horse, already.
Not the worst thing I’ve read today, but not something I would generally recommend.
Not a lot of emotion. Very matter of fact.
Some of the dialogue could get hard to follow as it might go for pages between names being used. Characters also tended to be a bit more pedantic than I feel is generally necessary.
The politics gets a bit overbearing at times. Stop beating the horse, already.
Not the worst thing I’ve read today, but not something I would generally recommend.
Statistikker
- Værker
- 14
- Medlemmer
- 29
- Popularitet
- #460,290
- Vurdering
- 3.9
- Anmeldelser
- 4
- ISBN
- 4
And then the wheels start to fall off.
The early chapters have a solid and authentic feel. The ‘magic’ system seems solid and the characters have depth. The nurse shows up and adds to the mix, then...wait, what?
Why did she leave? Why did he spills his guts about all of his powers to her seconds after meeting her? What happened to the Colonel?
There was ZERO motivation for her to leave. The interlude with the general was out of left field.
Insurmountable plot holes killed this for me. I quit just short of halfway through because the nurse shouldn’t have left. Absolutely no reason for her to abandon her post. In fact, leaving complicates their lives to no possible advantage. It was a pointless choice.
Clean grammar and spelling. A few acronyms that could’ve been explained better.
Massive plot hole.… (mere)